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Aaron Schlossberg’s Universe

Where I’m From

A fictional speaker traces where they come from through small objects, remembered sounds, and the things they almost said.

Piece details
Form
Persona poem
Year
Context
Fiction Writing
Status
Course exercise
Word Count
434 words
Reading Time
About 3 minutes
PDF Length
3 pages
Genre
Persona poetry

About This Piece

This was Practice Piece #8 for my Fiction Writing course at Muhlenberg College. I wrote it in the voice of a fictional speaker.

Where I’m From

I’m from the cul-de-sac where puddles don’t dry,
from the palm leaf that fell from a sky that doesn’t lie;
I’m from the bow that hums when the heater kicks on,
from the arrows I never loosed, just dreamed had gone;

I’m from the drain that breathes under turquoise light,
from daring my reflection to blink first at night;
I’m from Mom’s cracked mug that smells like cloves,
from Dad’s half-built shelf and his half-told jokes;

I’m from messages sent at 3:04,
from reading them back like confessions or lore;
I’m from the frog in the gutter that sang in the rain,
from the sidewalk chalk spelling my old nickname;

I’m from Tiana framed between thumbtacks and tape,
from Anika’s autograph looping like a secret escape;
I’m from the bus stop where the lamp hums loud,
from counting how many moths make a crowd;

I’m from the place where no one says “stay”,
from the voice that fills the silence before it decays;
I’m from the night I mistook fog for a ghost,
from learning that echoes tell truths the loudest voice won’t;

I’m from chlorine-stung eyes and the fear of the deep,
from a dream where the pool drain whispered in sleep;
I’m from my neighbor’s cat who stares like she knows,
from the cracked snow globe still making snow;

I’m from notebooks of words I meant to say,
from eraser dust that still spells my name halfway;
I’m from ceiling-fan shadows that count my sins,
from tracing my breath on the cold within;

I’m from the clock that skips the number four,
from a knock that came once and nevermore;
I’m from the promise to stay when I wanted to run,
from the soft hum of streetlights impersonating the sun;

I’m from the rain that plays piano on tin,
from knocking over the art room’s trash bin;
I’m from the attic where nothing’s been sold,
from jars of air labeled Young and Old;

I’m from the phone that rings when only Joyce is there,
from answering anyway just to prove I care;
I’m from the photo booth strip where my eyes are closed,
from the second shot where I almost look whole;

I’m from the words I rehearse before sleep,
from the small forgivenesses I never keep;
I’m from the streetlight that flickers when I pass,
from believing it’s trying to tell me “at last”;

I’m from nostalgic aesthetics that now scream “liminal!”,
from forty-five whole seconds on that goddamn bull;
I’m from constantly yapping ‘til the day is done,
and now from learning that silence is NOT where I’m from.


Author’s note: “Where I’m From” was originally a poem by George Ella Lyon. I have made my own version before (which can be accessed here); however, for this assignment, it was for my “Intro to Fiction Writing” course, so I didn’t think that I should just reproduce my own. It had to be fictional, whereas mine is truthful and about me. So what I did is imagine a new, fictional person, and write what their “Where I’m From” would be. I did insert a bit of prose that applies to me as well, but it is mostly fictional.

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